Review on cheehou WA2

The introduction has started off smoothly and the thesis statement has stated clearly the main topic for the essay which is on Supercritical-water-cooled reactors (SCWR).

In the second paragraph, the sentence structure for the following two sentences "Having those new features in place..." and "Having learnt from the previous accidents..." can be changed to link the two sentence more smoothly.

Also for the second paragraph, the paragraph structure is argument-counter-rebuttal-argument-counter-rebuttal. I suggest the two points which is on safety for operation and safety due the misuse of nuclear for production of nuclear weapon to be seperated into two paragraph.

Overall, there is a good usage of transitional phrase to link up the whole essay. Lastly, there is few grammatical error in the essay.

Summary of the article "A Force to Fight Global Warming"

An intact ecosystem plays an important part in retarding the build-up of atmospheric greenhouse gases. There are two reasons for tackling climate change by natural ecosystem. Firstly, natural ecosystem controls carbon and global biochemical cycles. Secondly, it is due practicality as it is the cheapest, safest and easiest solution.

Natural ecosystem not only helps in tackling climate change, but also it benefits human in two main ways. Firstly, it can saves live and sustain livelihoods. Secondly, it is due to the untapped potential of the natural ecosystem and biodiversity.

The governments need to find ways to monitor natural and modified ecosystems for true net emission. They also also need to find ways to value and market the other climate services that natural habitats provide. There might be corruption from the carbon market as many have suggested.